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Quick Critiques – Sept. 24, 2007

Posted by Don MacPherson on September 24th, 2007

Countdown to Mystery #1 (DC Comics)
by Steve Gerber, Justiniano & Walden Wong/by Matthew Sturges & Stephen Jorge Segovia

This ended up on my pull list by accident, as DC’s previous forays into this new two-feature format (Mystery in Space and Tales of the Unexpected) didn’t appeal to me. I was pleasantly surprised to find that both features here, despite their connections to recent DC crossover events, really piqued my interest. The main feature, featuring a new Dr. Fate, is really, relating the there-but-for-the-grace-of-God-go-I tale of an unfortunate soul. Despite this new Kent Nelson’s sins, he’s a sympathetic figure because anyone can relate to his ennui. The Eclipso story is the biggest surprise in the book. I haven’t cared for this incarnation of the character, but her corruption of such a bright and light character as Plastic Man made for a solid, suspenseful story. Sturges not only explores Eclipso as an insidious figure, but he uses the new female spin on the character as something of a dark siren. The art in both features is also well done. Justiniano’s exaggerated, elongated linework suits supernatural plot elements well. Wisely, the general Fate design is maintained for this new incarnation of the character; it’s a smart move, as the sharp but simple design helmet design ought to be preserved. Segovia — a new but notable name in super-hero comics art — does an excellent job of bringing a chilling tone to the story, one that’s definitely called for by the script. Eclipso’s convoluted history is summed up nicely, and the confrontation between villains at the end of this opening episode is a riveting one for readers familiar with the DC Universe. 7/10

Green Arrow/Black Canary Wedding Special #1 (DC Comics)
by Judd Winick & Amanda Conner

Given the saucy and sexy tone of the script, Amanda Conner is the perfect choice as artist for this one-shot. She really vamps it up throughout the book; even the big fight scene boasts a lot of irreverence and personality. Yes, the female characters are often presented in something of a cheesecake fashion, but so are the men. While Conner’s characters move in a convincing manner, there’s a cartoony quality at play in her work that exudes a sense of fun. Winick’s script is rather hit or miss, unfortunately. There’s definitely a dominantly adult tone to the book, but it’s consistent throughout (unlike the recent Justice League Wedding Special); the book never purports to boast any kind of appeal to younger readers. I also enjoyed that the story never seems to take itself too seriously. Of course, that makes the deadly serious ending feel far too jarring. The surprise ending is the books biggest liability, obviously. Shock value is emphasized rather than storytelling, and the fact that we’re given no explanation for it is frustrating. Furthermore, this comic book shares some scenes in common with a couple of other recent DC releases, but it seems there’s been next to no effort to maintain any semblance of continuity. The events in this one-shot are in direct conflict with those we see in the JL Wedding Special, for example. One of the elements DC is pushing these days is its tight continuity, but it’s just not to be found here. I found I was completely torn over this issue. There’s a lot to like here, and there are elements that alienate the reader rather than entertain. 4/10

Justice League/Hitman #1 (DC Comics)
by Garth Ennis & John McCrea

Garth Ennis has written a number of stories in the comic-book medium that one could argue show the writer’s disdain for the super-hero genre. His characters have thrown up on the Batman and used Spider-Man has a human shield. He’s arranged for Superman (or a facsimile thereof) to get a blow job and for Daredevil to be tied up like a bondage fetishist. With this comic book, he sets that satirical view of the spandex-clad set and embraces the genre. He treats these characters — and notably Superman — with a respect, even a reverence that’s surprising and engaging. Of course, there are still plenty of laughs to be had with this comic book; it features Tommy Monaghan and his oddball corner of the DC Universe after all. Revisiting these characters was a wonderfully entertaining experience for those of us who followed and loved Ennis and McCrea’s Hitman series. The good news is that Ennis’s script for this new project is completely accessible. He references Hitman continuity quite a bit but in a manner that includes new readers rather than excludes. If this story doesn’t create a demand for Hitman trade paperbacks, I’d be rather surprised. The only element in the script that didn’t quite seem right to me was the Flash’s antagonistic attitude toward Green Lantern, but maybe I’m just forgetting something about their relationship from early in Kyle’s “career” as GL. McCrea’s artwork is as distorted and bizarre as ever, and it’s perfect for the gang at Noonan’s Bar. The artist also brings a larger-than-life quality to bear in his depiction of the Justice League. He especially conveys a kindness and nobility in Superman, which are key elements in this story. 8/10

Marvel Comics Presents #1 (Marvel Comics)
by various

Marvel ventures into the anthology format once again, and I’m at a loss to figure out why. I wasn’t a fan of the original, biweekly incarnation of this title years ago, but I was drawn to this relaunch based on the positive buzz around Stuart and Kathryn Immonen’s Hellcat feature in the book. That segment is certainly fun, tapping into the character’s roots in girls’ fashion comics and the weird supernatural elements that came along later. the art for the piece is energetic and full of personality as well, but that will come as little surprise to those who delighted at Stuart Immonen’s work on NextWave. Unfortunately, the script is a bit scattered and quite inaccessible. The first feature, entitled “Vanguard,” is intriguing, but the shorter nature of the segments in this episodic anthology is really limiting. The Spider-Man and Thing stories are rather generic and unremarkable in their own different ways, though the Spidey story was fun and reminiscent of the Alan Davis-penned Captain Britain stories of the 1980s. The Weapon Omega story, featuring the new Guardian from Omega Flight, is a puzzling choice. The character is still a relatively unknown and uninteresting entity, and it seems like fleshing out his character eight pages at a time in this title as opposed to a subsequent Omega Flight series is a poor choice. Andrea DiVito’s more traditional, straightforward super-hero art style seems a poor fit for the melancholy tone of the character as well. It’s my hope that Marvel will eventually collect the separate features in their own trade-paperback editions somewhere down the line, allowing the cream of the MCP crop rise to the top and consumers to choose which characters and creators they will to follow. 4/10

Jungle Girl #s 0 & 1 (Dynamite Entertainment)
by Frank Cho, Doug Murray & Adriano Batista

Shanna the She-Devil. Sheena, Queen of the Jungle. And now Jungle Girl. Was there really a demand for this material? And for a majority of it to come from Frank Cho? The story — of a jungle warrior named Jana who rushes to the aid of a TV crew that crashlands in her prehistoric homeland — is straightforward and fairly cliched at times, but the real purpose of the title is all too apparent. Cho’s script is consistent in that it keeps coming back to puns and nods at the title character’s state of (un)dress and physical attributes, and the art by Adriano Batista includes completely gratuitous shots of Jana’s tits and ass. I’m guessing that this may be a repackaging and reconfiguration of a planned Shanna sequel story Cho crafted that Marvel passed on (another Shanna series, Survival of the Fittest, is underway, penned by Jimmy Palmiotti and Justin Gray). The only things about this title that are interesting are the exotic flora and fauna, and those elements are things we’ve seen time and time again in the past. 3/10

World War Hulk #4 (Marvel Comics)
by Greg Pak, John Romita Jr. & Klaus Janson

While I remain pleased overall with the energy, focus and entertainment value of the event, this penultimate issue is a bit of a letdown as compared to the other chapters in the story. Little changes from the beginning of the issue to the end, and the reader doesn’t learn all that much more about the characters or direction of the plot. The arena fighting that serves as the focus for this issue was a foregone conclusion, based on the preparations we saw in the previous issue. Romita and Janson’s intense and gritty artwork serves the violent nature of the plot here perfectly, just as it has in previous episodes. I must also point out that the merging of Christina Strain’s colors and Chris Eliopoulos’s lettering in the latter part of the book to set the Sentry apart from all other characters was thoroughly effective. Overall, while this issue was fun, it felt as though the story was spinning its wheels a bit. 6/10

7 Responses to “Quick Critiques – Sept. 24, 2007”

  1. Dave T. Game Says:

    Don wrote (re: the GA/BC Wedding Special):
    “There’s a lot to like here, and there are elements that alienate the reader rather than entertain.”

    Agreed on that completely. I noticed some of the same continuity problems you mention, but I was able to put them aside because I was having so much fun with the comic. But then the ending just ruined it for me… either it won’t stick and it was a cheap and unneeded shock, or it’s a lame, already-done plot point.

  2. Dan Says:

    I agree with both of you about the Wedding Special. I really liked the main story and thought the wedding scene was really nice. The art really gave a good feel to the book and to what I thought was going to be a nice, fun story.

    But that ending…comes out of nowhere and frustrated me a lot. And the worst part, the interview with Winick at Newsarama did not make me feel any better about the ending. And usually, I do actually like Winick’s books. It was just a strange read.

  3. Court Says:

    I’m surprised with the middling reviews for WW Hulk #4 I’ve seen popping up around the net. I thought it was the strongest issue yet and I think Pak has done more to illustrate the pomposity of Tony Stark and Reed Richards in one issue than anyone involved in Ciivil War was able to do with 7 issues and it’s many spin offs. I like that Hulk is making them feel what he felt before he gives out his final punishment. Can’t wait for the next issue and I’m haven’t been a Hulk fan since Peter David ended his long run on the book.

    I’m really curious to see if the Sentry will still have a calming effect on The Hulk or if The Hulk’s rage is so strong that nothing can calm him down. I think the one misstep this series has made has been to not really explain the relationship between Sentry and The Hulk. I think a lot of people are expecting a huge showdown (which there will probably be) instead of the more likely discussion between the two characters. They didn’t call the Sentry out because of his powers or his strength. They called him out because he’s the only one in the world who can calm the Hulk down.

  4. Sven Says:

    I think the fact that Ollie’s eyes were glowing green was enough of a hint for me, but, yeah, that ending was all kinds of goofy. Reminded me quite a bit of a cliffhanger ending of “Lois & Clark”, actually… of course, that’s the episode that most people point to as the downfall of the series.

    (On the other hand, the double-page spread more than made up for it. There’s so much good character work there)

    One thing I didn’t understand was why Winick felt as though he had to justify Ollie’s choice to propose in that Newsarama interview. He was about to do it when Kevin Smith was writing him, and that was five years ago. Presumably his thoughts on the subject hadn’t changed much.

    Don: Wally and Kyle were really uncomfortable around each other for quite a while in the early JLA stories (although, to give credit where it’s due, I think the idea came out of Waid and Marz doing a crossover rather than Morrison thinking it up), so that was perfectly natural. Man, that JLA was so much more fun without Hal being written as the guy trying to be the cool uncle to the younger heroes.

  5. Ovid Says:

    Conner’s an absolute gem, no doubt about it. There were multiple things that irritated me about the script (a lot to do with how BC was written, but also Superman’s wide-eyed innocence – he’s an idealist, but not a child), but the art was well worth the price of entry. I’m really looking forward to the Terra mini.

    I enjoyed the Dr Fate story immensely, but wasn’t happy with the first part of the Eclipso one. The villainous Constantine knock-off showed way too much contempt for the Spectre. If you’re going to do dark and vicious characters, don’t try to make them look bad-ass by making your superheroes look small, especially the ones that are supposed to be awe-inspiring.

  6. Don MacPherson Says:

    Ovid wrote:
    The villainous Constantine knock-off showed way too much contempt for the Spectre. If you’re going to do dark and vicious characters, don’t try to make them look bad-ass by making your superheroes look small, especially the ones that are supposed to be awe-inspiring.

    I didn’t care for David Lapham’s take on the Spectre and host Crispus Allen in Tales of the Unexpected, but I did like Sturges’s depiction of them in the Eclipso feature.

  7. Ovid Says:

    What was it you liked about their depiction here? To me they just looked weak. I mean, if the Spectre doesn’t scare his victims, what’s he for?