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Let’s Talk About X

Posted by Don MacPherson on February 3rd, 2010

Ultimate X #1
“Chapter One: His Father’s Son”
Writer: Jeph Loeb
Pencils: Arthur Adams
Digital inks & colors: Aspen MLT
Letters: Comicraft
Editor: Mark Paniccia
Publisher: Marvel Comics
Price: $3.99 US

I only made two issues into Jeph Loeb’s last foray into Marvel’s Ultimate Universe, Ultimatum, before the excesses of the plotting turned me off, and I dropped Hulk a few months, though I did enjoy some of Loeb’s Red Hulk storylines over the course of its first year. So some might wonder why I’m back for another dose of Loeb after his other recent disappointments (albeit strong-selling ones). Well, artist Arthur Adams draws some pretty pictures at times, and I did like the prospect of a new character (rather than a retooled one) being featured in a new Ultimate title. The good news is that this is much better than Ultimatum, as it boasts a more character-driven tone. Furthermore, I like how Loeb and Marvel have taken the notion of mutants an analogy for racism in society to an extreme, albeit in a logical way given the events of Ultimatum. The bad news, though, is that the potential in the plot is overshadowed by the bombastic, ridiculously outdated quality of the opening scene and the central character’s impossibly easy acceptance of the weirdness that’s erupted in his life.

Jimmy Hudson is 16 years old, lives in a small town in Florida and lately gives his parents quite a few headaches. Jimmy’s a bit of a wild child, getting into trouble at school and elsewhere too. Lucky for him his father is James Hudson, the town’s sheriff and a Gulf War vet. What Jimmy doesn’t know is that he’s adopted, and his real father is a guy who helped his adopted dad get through some tight scrapes in Iraq back in 1991. After something incredible happens that makes Jimmy and others realize he’s not a normal kid, someone arrives with a message that will change his entire life.

Arthur Adams offers up some over-the-top and attractive visuals, but I don’t know that they actually serve the story all that well. While he handles the rural Florida setting well, his portrayal of the various characters can be distracting at times. While I can understand why he’d depict the main character as lithe and ripped, there’s nary a hint of him as the regular kid he would’ve been for most of his life. I think the character-driven storytelling would’ve been more effective if Jimmy looked a bit more average rather than as the impeccably and impossibly perfect, Adonis-like figure we see in these pages. Furthermore, the bimbo at his side in the opening scene is far too sexualized. She’s clearly intended as nothing more than a sexual object, and it just looks ridiculous rather than titillating.

Villain variantFoliogram variantFour covers… two regular covers, and a couple of more expensive, rarer variants. This book carries the names of two of the industry’s more popular creators and stars the son of Marvel’s most popular character (or at least one incarnation of him). Are all these covers really necessary to sell this comic book?

The reinvention of James Hudson and his wife Heather as regular folks is an interesting choice. He’s no longer a brainy super-scientist type, and she’s an odd but interesting mix of meekness and feistiness. Essentially, they’re brand-new characters, but Loeb has still maintained their connection to Wolverine in this alternate continuity. Still, I have to admit I was disappointed by some of the changes. As a Canadian and a fan of John Byrne’s original Alpha Flight series, I didn’t really appreciate the recasting of the Hudsons as Americans. It’s a minor gripe and a personal one, and it’s not really a criticism of the storytelling, per se. I just figured I should own up to the bias and the tinge of disappointment I felt at one point in the comic.

Loeb opts to open the series with a scene that unfortunately started my eyes rolling. I was honestly at a loss to figure out the time period in which the series was set, as the drag race (and the teen characters’ attire) looked more like something out of the 1950s. It seemed like Ultimate X was more likely going to have a connection to James Dean rather than to Wolverine. It’s a ludicrous scene that’s completely out of touch, not at all convincing.

I like the notion of a mutant child being adopted by a human couple. I like the idea of a ragtag band of emerging mutants being on the run from an entire country that’s terrified of them (which is a premise that one of those variant covers seems to promise). More importantly, I like the idea of a regular kid struggling to cope with inconceivable power and circumstances. Brian Michael Bendis pulled it off nicely a decade ago when he launched Ultimate Spider-Man, and Loeb has acknowledged that served as an inspiration for this new Marvel mutant title. But Loeb doesn’t succeed as Bendis did. Jimmy is far too accepting of what’s happening. He barely freaks out. Loeb tries to make up for it with a quiet father/son moment to close out the issue, but that alone isn’t enough to balance his reactions (or lack thereof) in the rest of the issue. 5/10

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6 Responses to “Let’s Talk About X”

  1. Dwight Williams Says:

    Your distaste for the Hudsons’ recasting is personal, but minor or not, it is shared.

    Some things shouldn’t be messed with.

  2. Don MacPherson Says:

    Dwight wrote:
    Some things shouldn’t be messed with.

    I wouldn’t go that far. One of the things I like about the Ultimate Universe is that creators are free to mess with characters. For example, I love how Damon Lindelof radically changed who She-Hulk is and why she became She-Hulk in Ultimate Wolverine Vs. Hulk.

  3. drew Says:

    I totally agree about the first scene. I almost threw the comic down after realizing that that “drag race” was supposed to be present day. What were they thinking? And why on earth would a 16-year-old kid — who apparently just got his drivers license(?) — have some crazy sexual fiend draped on him. Drag racing? Seriously?

    I think they would have been much better served to devote a whole issue —or four-part series —to Hudson’s discovery of his powers. With more focus on the kid’s adolescence lifestyle and interaction with friends, teen angst, bullies, etc. There’s a lot of great material there that they basically just leaped over.

    Disappointment.

  4. fanbla72 Says:

    a lot of the negatives being described seem to be all too pervasive throughout Marvel’s books, but not only theirs. you’d think a well resourced publisher would have a team that’d read this stuff before going to print for a bit of a sanity check.

    sometimes i think professional writers include this sort of stuff intentionally just to annoy readers.

    having said all that.. overall it sounds like a solid book. i’m going to buy it(!) and i’ll now cope that much better with the crappy, annoying aspects knowing that others (Don, Drew) have suffered from the same. thanks.

  5. T. AKA Ricky Raw Says:

    If this book is as good as a 5/10, then it must have been the strongest effort Loeb has done in his whole career. I’ve never seen a Loeb book worthy of anything over 3/10.

  6. Don MacPherson Says:

    T. AKA Ricky Raw, I don’t think that’s a fair assessment. There have been a number of Loeb-penned stories that I’ve enjoyed over the years: anything he’s done with Tim Sale and early issues of his Superman run in 1999 come to mind.

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